Bugs

[den]

I'm not sure this one works very well.

Comments

[pipibluestockin]

Perhaps the dust bunny needs to be bounced off Fly for effect.

Or perhaps my sense of humour just extends to somebody being bonked on the noggin with a dust bunny. :)

[psaakyrn.livejournal.com]

I think the problem is that the blur doesn't show direction of movement...

[kelloggs2066.livejournal.com]

Oh! I'm bad! I tried commenting on this before, and it didnt' go through. :(

Looks great! My previous comment was along the lines of not seeing the dust bunny blur. This works much better. :)

Scott

[hedgegoth.livejournal.com]

ahhhH! now i get it!
cool

[oceansedge.livejournal.com]

Yep much better... I get it now!

[blush10ac.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I didn't know he threw it till you re-drew it.

Maybe it could land on Fly, bounce off his head or something next.

There could be sneezing then. If Bugs sneeze.

[hespa.livejournal.com]

My main problem with it was the background being so dark I couldn't figure out where the bottom of the first panel became the bottom of the third. I also thought for a little while that the first panel was split horizontally - I wouldn't have known it wasn't if not for other people's references to throwing, which I eventually realised referred to that panel.

But on the whole I'm enjoying "Bugs" immensely!