Bugs

[den]

I'm not sure this one works very well.

Comments

[pipibluestockin]

Perhaps the dust bunny needs to be bounced off Fly for effect.

Or perhaps my sense of humour just extends to somebody being bonked on the noggin with a dust bunny. :)

[psaakyrn.livejournal.com]

I think the problem is that the blur doesn't show direction of movement...

[copperwolf.livejournal.com]

I didn't even notice there was anything in that corner back there until I read this comment.

Speedy has Freefall-robot eyes! Tee hee.

[dewhitton.livejournal.com]

He does! Sort of.

Each eye is just 2 white cubes I rotate to give his expressions. I think it works, which is not bad for a head that's just a cylinder

[kelloggs2066.livejournal.com]

Oh! I'm bad! I tried commenting on this before, and it didnt' go through. :(

Looks great! My previous comment was along the lines of not seeing the dust bunny blur. This works much better. :)

Scott

[hedgegoth.livejournal.com]

ahhhH! now i get it!
cool

[oceansedge.livejournal.com]

Yep much better... I get it now!

[blush10ac.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I didn't know he threw it till you re-drew it.

Maybe it could land on Fly, bounce off his head or something next.

There could be sneezing then. If Bugs sneeze.

[dewhitton.livejournal.com]

They can't sneeze. The bugs have no noses. How do they smell? They don't. :P

[philrancid.livejournal.com]

no no no. How do they smell? Awful. (stolen from Monty Python--picture Hitler saying it in German)

[hespa.livejournal.com]

My main problem with it was the background being so dark I couldn't figure out where the bottom of the first panel became the bottom of the third. I also thought for a little while that the first panel was split horizontally - I wouldn't have known it wasn't if not for other people's references to throwing, which I eventually realised referred to that panel.

But on the whole I'm enjoying "Bugs" immensely!

[copperwolf.livejournal.com]

This would be more clear of the pictures were strung out in a horizontal line, or if the grid lines dividing them were white instead of black.

It's much easier to understand what's happening in the re-drawn third panel than in the old version.

The whole story remains very cute. :)

[dewhitton.livejournal.com]

Good idea! White grid-lines it is